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Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Writing Contest Judge--The Who and the Why




Who? Me? Judge a Writing Contest?

Imagine this scenario:

You’ve been reading critically for years. You’ve picked up many a book and thought, “I can write better than this.” Then, you tried writing and found out that it’s a little harder than it looks. So you’ve been studying the craft of writing, and you understand the basics. Your local or online writing organization is asking for judges for the annual writing contest. (You are a member of American Christian Fiction Writers, Romance Writers of America, your local writers group or a critique group, aren’t you?)

You're having coffee with your friend, who is a published author. She surprises you by suggesting,“You should be a first-round judge.”

Your mouth drops open and you search for words. “But . . . but I’ve never done anything like that before.”

She smiles. “There’s always a first time. Remember how nervous you were to hand me your first chapter to critique? You’ve come a long way since then.”

Your mouth is dry and your breathing feels a little shallow. “I don’t know . . .”

“Remember why I took my daughter away last weekend?” She waits for your nod, then laughs. “Yeah, we had the birds-and-bees talk. I didn’t think I could do it, but you reassured me that we’d both survive. And we did. Thanks.”

You laugh, feeling more relaxed. “I don’t think many parents like giving that talk.” You look into your mentor’s eyes. “You really think I’m ready to judge?”

She nods and pats your hand. “Absolutely.”

Qualifications of a first-round judge:

--Understands the basics like POV, grammar, pacing, genre, character development, and continuity.

--Impartial.

--Follows contest rules.

Two of the Best Reasons to Judge:

--To give back to the writing community.

---To increase your writing skills. You often learn how to improve your writing when you spot mistakes others have made.

When your local or online writing organization asks for first-round judges, don’t think of reasons why you can’t. Be quick to volunteer. Sure, it’s intimidating, but you’ll learn on the job. In the long run, you’ll be glad you did.

~Roxanne Sherwood

Sunday, April 26, 2009

Book Review: The Noticer

"I notice things about situations and people that produce perspective. Remember, young man, experience is not the best teacher. Other people's experience is the best teacher."—Jones, An elderly man with white hair, of indiscriminate age and race, wearing blue jeans, a white T-shirt and leather flip flops carrying a battered old suitcase.

Andy Andrews

The Noticer: Sometimes, all a person needs is a little perspective

176 pp. Thomas Nelson Publishers

By Scoti Springfield Domeij

The Noticer, a self-help book set in a fiction setting, came highly recommended to me by several readers that I respect. When people hype a book, it sets up my expectations. I anticipated it to be a page-turner until the last page.

For me, it wasn't.

However, from a writer's perspective, the book is an easy read and creatively constructed. I enjoyed the author's vocabulary and the stories and pictures his words painted in my mind. Flowing seamlessly from chapter to chapter, every chapter and story provides a nugget of wisdom for a particular problem facing a character.

Chapter 1 made me wonder if The Noticer was a type of takeoff on The Shack.

Chapters 2 & 3: The advice that Jones, a character who turns up in individual's lives when they are struggling, synthesizes The Five Love Languages: How to Express Heartfelt Commitment to Your Matedown for a couple on the verge of divorce.

After reading the first three chapters and making notes, I set the book aside to attend to my life. The book did not motivate me to pick it back up again until a few hours before deadline for this review.

Chapter 4 is a lesson on self-talk, fear and worry. Jones tells Worrywart Walker "Forty percent of the things you worry about will never occur…. Thirty percent of the things you worry about are things that have already happened—in the past. And all the worry in the world ain't gonna change what's already happened, right? Twelve percent of all worries have to do with needless imaginings about our health. My leg hurts. Do I have cancer? My head hurts. Do I have a tumor? My daddy died of a heart attack when he was sixty, and I'm fifty-nine…. Ten percent would be petty-little-nothing worries about what other people think. So if my math is right, that leaves eight percent…. Eight percent for legitimate concerns … these legitimate concerns are things that can actually be dealt with. Most people spend so much time fearing the things that are never going to happen or can't be controlled that they have no energy to deal with the few things they can actually handle (pp. 54, 55)."

Chapter 5: Jones expresses to unmarried, college-age students, who call him "Garcia," how to determine if someone would make a suitable life partner.

Chapter 6: Jones helps a widowed woman realize that her life has meaning. Generations yet unborn would be shaped by her actions. "No matter your age, physical condition, financial situation, color, gender, emotional state, or belief… everything you do, every move you make, matters to all of us—and forever," (p. 91).

Chapter 7: Although, Jones seems to represent a wise, Jesus-figure moving among men and women, this chapter reinforces a theme running throughout the book, "you can do whatever you want to do. You can accomplish whatever you want to accomplish [emphases mine]."

Before I read The Noticer, I asked a fellow struggler on the road of life to read it and provide feedback on the book.

A Fellow Struggler's Thoughts on The Noticer

"The chapters are vignettes of human interactions with the basic plot being the mythical figure, Jones, imparting wisdom, or perspective, to other people.

The perspective the author, Andy Andrews, dishes up via his "Jones" character is insightful, timeless, and often fresh.

The last chapter sums up his theme: "In desperate times, much more than anything else, folks need perspective." This perspective, Andrews explains, leads to calm, clear thinking, new ideas, and ultimately "the bloom . . . of an answer."

How true!

But something feels slightly misleading to me in this theme. It's more what he doesn't say than what he does say. Yes, we all need perspective when we are mired in our difficulties. Someone wiser than us who connects us with perspective is a true gift to us.

What bothers me is the premise that life can be figured out and conquered by me IF I will just apply myself . . . if I will avail myself of the timeless wisdom in books like Andrew's. It's partial truths like this one that are ubiquitous these days. Books, CD's, Videos, TV, and popular guru-speakers all trumpet their "secrets."

The teaching of all this self-help information is this: I can manage my life. There are "how-to's" to be learned and applied that will get me over the hump, out of the crisis, on to the life I dream about. What I need is the information or insight that will give me perspective. (I can have what I want…)

It's our modern day remix of the Garden. I can do this, God—on my own. It's also terribly Western because of our financial means to navigate our own lives.

I continually come back to the one truth that anchors me and gives me a foundation for a meaningful, sane life. The truth isn't perspective, insight or a secret. It's a person, a personality—it's Jesus. When I call out to Him in my heart, He answers. He gives me direction—sometimes using books like The Noticer—most powerfully in scripture.

Most of all, He gives me His presence. I am not alone. He doesn't drop a clue down on me and then leave. He is with me—in me—every moment of every day. Jesus is the "secret" our Christian gurus are tiptoeing around these days. He's out there, but not really useful for anything tangible. And that is what I take issue with. I've found EVERY human resource inferior to Jesus.

I hate it that we hide Him…and call ourselves 'Christian.'"

Chapters 8–10 and The Reader's Guide

Chapter 8: It seemed to me that the story reduces The Five Languages of Apology: How to Experience Healing in all Your Relationshipsto a couple of insightful paragraphs.

Chapter 9: Andy, a main character, is rather shocked to see Jones as a shape-shifter. Jones' familiar face was "motionless—changing—moving—and yet it was not. This old-man face that had caused me in the past to casually wonder whether it was of Anglo or Africa descent shifted visibly before me. As I thought of him as "Garcia," he appeared quite obviously Hispanic, yet when "Chen" came to my mind, there was an old Asian man before me (p. 127)." At the end of this chapter, Jones takes Andy back to the place where Jones found Andy—homeless, living under a pier. Jones reaches out again to another young, homeless man and the cycle of providing encouraging perspective to someone begins again.

Chapter 10: Jones disappears, leaving behind his familiar suitcase. People, whose lives Jones' touched, gather around the suitcase, talking about the difference he made in their lives. They open the mysterious suitcase in which Jones has left them a note, which concludes the book.

A Reader's Guide provides questions for each chapter that can be used for group discussion or personal reflection.

The author weaves story, relevant problems, and advice together. Since I assumed that Jones represented Jesus, it seemed a little weird to hear the Jesus character quoting studies. The book, a short and easy read, would appeal to the ADHD short-attention spanned, Internet scanning generation.

Friday, April 24, 2009

Quick List of 50 Writing Tools





I'm learning from my writing comrade, Scoti, that there's a real advantage to trolling the Internet for writing information. Granted, some of the links are worthless rabbit trails and advertising dead ends. But I've watched Scoti unearth some valuable information--and I decided to do some cybersleuthing of my own.

In fairly short order, I stumbled upon Poynter Online. The Google blurb said Poynter Online "helps journalists do their jobs better and to serve their communities ... and provides useful tools ...

One of the first tools I discovered was writing coach Roy Clark's "Fifty Writing Tools: Quick Tips." Clark suggests:

Use this quick list of Writing Tools as a handy reference. Copy it and keep it in your wallet or journal, or near your desk or keyboard. Share it and add to it.

Categories include:

Nuts and Bolts
Special Effects
Blueprints
Useful Habits


A number of the tools are also available via podcast. Here are one tool example from each category:

Nuts and Bolts:
Begin sentences with subjects and verbs.
Make meaning early, then let weaker elements branch to the right.

Special Effects:
Prefer the simple over the technical.
Use shorter words, sentences and paragraphs at points of complexity.

Blueprints:
Work from a plan.
Index the big parts of your work.

Useful Habits:
Draft a mission statement for your work.
To sharpen your learning, write about your writing.



As the photo at the beginning of this blog suggests, Clark also has a book, Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer, from which this quick list is culled.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

"Are you a novelist?"

There's a huge temptation to stay silent about writing fiction. At what point do you become a novelist, while typing “Chapter One” or “The End?”

One day, while homeschooling six children, I decided to write a novel. I had earned a B.S. in journalism and had a life-long love affair with books, so I thought I knew what I was doing. Turns out, I didn’t. I really had no idea how to write a scene, let alone chapter after chapter of the critters. I’d never heard of writing craft books. I thought you just used your creativity and muddled through until you held a completed manuscript. When I attended my first writing conference to meet an editor or agent, I learned that the conferences also taught writing courses. I invested in a shelf full of books on various aspects of fiction and began studying the craft. But during all those years, I told no one that I was writing. (By the way, if it take five years to write a novel, you’re most NOT writing one.)

When I met a NICU nurse, I made a mental note to interview her later. But she moved, so later never came. Then, I moved and the same thing happened with all the other people I’d intended to interview for my novel. The reason I missed opportunities to interview these people who came into my life was because I didn't want to tell them why I was interested. I wasn’t ready to admit that I was a novelist. Maybe, I wasn’t sure I was one. I had no way to gauge whether I'd be successful or not, and I didn't want to answer all the questions that were sure to follow.

Eventually, my family knew I was writing. One night, I stayed up late to finish editing a chapter for a contest I was entering. When I’d been in bed for an hour, my five-year-old woke me because he’d had a bad dream. I ended up missing church, and my children told everyone that I stayed home because of the contest. No! It was because of my child. But they’d told people about my writing, and the news was out.

The flip side to revealing my secret life is I’ve generated interest in my novel. Only problem is people are asking to buy a book I haven’t sold. I admit that I’m an unpublished novelist. Now, I’m often asked, “How’s the novel coming along?” and “Do you have a publisher yet?” Many days, those questions aren’t fun to answer. But when I’m asked, “If you could have any job in the world, what would it be?” There’s an easy answer, “Novelist.” I’m living my dream. (Except, of course, I’d like to add “published” in front of “novelist.”)

Have you told more than your closest friends or relatives that you’re writing fiction? If you have, when did you announce your news? If you haven’t, at what point will you admit you’re on the writing road?

~Roxanne Sherwood

Sunday, April 19, 2009

Tools You Can Use: Automatically Record Source Details

"Information is a source of learning. But unless it is organized, processed, and available to the right people in a format for decision making, it is a burden, not a benefit."--William Pollard

Make the Internet Your Personal Research Database

The Internet offers writers the ability to conduct powerful research. Do you struggle organizing all your sources so they are readily available to write endnotes or a bibliography or even worse, when your publisher requests your original research sources? Now you don't have to rely on your memory or photocopy a ream of documents. I've bookmarked Web pages, saved the Web page (HTML file) on my computer, and cut-and-pasted the text into a text file or Microsoft Word document. But the main drawback of storing my research in these ways is organizing and managing my research and sources.

How do you collect, organize, and keep information for endnotes or bibliographies? Cogitum Co-Citer, a content organizer, automatically records quoted text, its title, the URL, and the date you collected it. Often, I've collected research, then when I went to use it in an article or chapter, I can't remember how I wanted to use the information. Co-Citer lets you add a comment as to how this information may be useful in a book proposal or how you want to incorporate it into a chapter or title. Plus, it allows you to create folders for specific writing projects.

How to Use Cogitum Co-Citer

Collect Breaking News

Don't have time to keep up with breaking news? Select a text or a fragment of the text, put it into the collection, and return later. Create special folders for the news agencies and assign descriptive comments. Co-citer stores the complete text of articles, text fragments, or just headlines. Because Cogitum Co-Citer stores the Internet address where the text was found, you can easily link back to the full news story at any time.

Collect Aphorisms

If you find a quote you want to remember (or return to), store it using Cogitum Co-Citer. You can create folders for aphorisms according to authors, subjects, or Internet source.

Conduct Research

Writing often requires research. Cogitum Co-Citer creates a syllabus of texts you read. Because the program allows you to create and manage folders, you can create special folders or subfolders according to the source, author, or point of view. When your publisher needs documentation for your sources, collected texts can be sent via e-mail.

Cogitum Co-Citer Features

  • Create and manage new collections
  • Create and manage folders for organizing texts
  • Add comments about the grabbed text
  • Sort records according to various criteria
  • Follow the link associated with the grabbed text just by clicking on it
  • Import/export collections to work with them at other computers, to split a large collection into smaller ones, or to combine small collections into a larger one
  • Publish the collection as a Web page
  • Send the collection by e-mail
  • Control how the grabbed texts and information are displayed
  • Search the collection
  • Print texts from a collection
  • Delete grabbed texts from the collection

Thursday, April 16, 2009

See Your Plot’s Timeline


"Man is eminently a storyteller. His search for a purpose, a cause, an ideal, a mission and the like is largely a search for a plot and a pattern in the development of his life story—a story that is basically without meaning or pattern."—Eric Hoffer

By Scoti Springfield Domeij

Does your novel have an awesome cast of characters, yet you're still struggling to figure out the plot's timeline? Here are a few tools to plot out your time line—visually.

TimeToast: Interactive Timeline Creator

TimeToast lets you create timelines in a snap. You can add events for different calendar dates with pictures and text descriptions and then view your timeline.

TimeToast Features

  • Share your timelines with critique group members
  • Create an unlimited number of timelines
  • Embed the timeline on your website
  • FREE

Timerime: Flash-based Timeline Maker

Timerime helps you to create, view, and compare timelines.

Timerime Features

  • Create comprehensive multimedia timelines with pictures, text and videos
  • Let your critique group view your timeline or share theirs
  • Embed timelines on other web pages
  • FREE

TimeAndDate.com

Timeanddate.com deals with everything related to time and date. You can create a calendar for the year(s) in which your novel is set. Need to know if on a certain day there was a full moon? A word of warning—the website creator's organizational thinking for the site is a mystery to me.

Time and Date Features

  • Convert time zones and run countdown to a particular date
  • Create country-based custom calendars
  • Includes sun and moon calculators